itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[S1GG - Bridge Zone]

Sounds pretty tight : D

The major sound is relaxing and fun, very much enjoyable. What program do you use? Nice ; )

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

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mikeblastdude7 responds:

Thanks! I use FL Studio.

I checked out your audio, pretty good stuff. :D

[God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen]

A soothing rendition!

Felt calming and just great, I wish I could play piano this well. The phrasing is different. The strings don't sound entirely too good with the song. Maybe not the strings themselves, but some of the chords are weird, might have been intentional, but it's just not right I guess. Maybe just a flute countermelody and a viola or cello harmonic would suit a little better. It would help the feeling you've created within this piece : D

-Great job man, I like it, just use that advice, and set sail : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

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Quickbeam responds:

Thanks for the review. And i have already voted, downloaded and reviewed that song many times. Some were one alt accounts.

[The Hero's Requiem]

Cool Progression!

The way the song evolves is just perplexing and quite enjoyable. It changes up constantly and keeps the listener hooked it. The drum samples at the sped up part is kinda generic, but nothing too bad : P

Very nice job : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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Stratoavis responds:

It took me a long time to fit that piano in there ever since I developed it out of nowhere! But I figured i'd mix it up with different movements. Glad you liked it though! ^_^

[DJ DaVinster- Paradise [FULL]]

Okay...

You major problem is the kick drum, it's so dead. It really hurts the theme of the song with its Fruity-ness (cough cough, add FX to the Fruity Loop sample). Also, add some more percussion stuff to it. A driving percussion force is missing and it hurts the song. The synth composition is great, but where's the rest of the show? Get some better samples, google "Breakbeat-Paradise", got some tight drum samples, and add FX, using the mixer, to the bass drum. YES, it can be more bassy : D

-Good try : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the advice, but I made this song in about an hour. I forgot about the other drums :P

[The Grand Adventure Begins]

HAHAHA!

I seriously half expected this to be techno, the progression just make the song sound like it should be that way. The progression is great though. Maybe you should make this techno? I dunno, it's still a cool mix you've produced : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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TheAmateurAnimator responds:

I'm not too good with making real good techno. Give me a while to learn drumloop construction and automation clips(and the tons of other stuff I need to learn). I'm going to have to redo this and add on a few seconds or make a new song with this theme, because it didn't meet the length requirements for the MRAC. So I'll make sure you see the new version!

[E. Allen's Experimental Chaos]

Nice : D

Only problem are the strings. They sound terrible! Try some different chords, or just take those beginning strings out all together. It's a good loop : )

-ImperfectDisciple-

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E-SBP responds:

Thanks, dude! Aw, man, not the strings! Oh noes!!!

[Super Mario Land 2 (+1)]

You're right : D

No one really has done this, but you for the most part. Tight mix, sounds pretty cool : D

-The percussion crash is cheezy, change that.
-Nice synths
-Loops nice
-Nice percussion snares, but more dynamics within the hits. It's pretty good, but more syncopation rather than pitches : P

Very nice : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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CyrusOfNaias responds:

I certainly will. Thanks for the review!

[<R+> Ride on the Sky]

0 whoa!

Dude, this song is really uplifting! The beginning is just insane! Beats my next techno mix out of the water, at least with the synths. I wish I had the knowledge to create those kind of synths, those are the synths I've wanted to hear for a while.

-I know this sounds n00bish, but what program do you use for those synths?

-Some of the drum synths seemed Fruity Looped, didn't match too well. Wait, just the crash cymbal seems that way.

-The mastering is kinda weird at times with the synths and the drums.

-Tight mix, pro quality here : D

-Expand it a little more on the trance side, then make a DnB version : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Rawrthaas responds:

hi disciple.. thanks for reviewing.. A DnB version sounds cool. I use a plug in called z3t4+ for most synths.

[{dj-N} Listen to Your Heart]

Tight!

The only 3 bad things...

-The "goodbye" vocal ruined the beginning.
-The piano samples and drums seem too...Fruity Loop-ish? Some better sampling there is needed!
-Ending was just obliterated by a drum ending.

Otherwise...you're synths seems pretty tight : D
-Automation is okay.
-Bass synth riff really cool.

So, in short...

-Drop vocals.
-Get better piano samples if possible (it's all cool if you can't : D )
-Work on putting FX on drum samples or getting new samples for drums (hi-hat was good though).
-Work on a better beginning and ending...

...and you're set man, nice : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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dj-Nate responds:

Thanks for the constructive review man! Checking your song now.

[R00ts - Pianoforte]

A nice comeback into Newgrounds : D

-The vocals seemed a little distorted.
-The transfer from the synth to the piano wasn't pleasant.
-Ending weird, could have held that out.

Now for the good : D

-Great automation!
-Great drum samples, fit nicely.
-Diggin' the riffs. Is there one main melody, I couldn't tell : P
-Great sound FX

Great job man : D

-ImperfectDisciple- (formerly SuperDrummer146)

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R00ts responds:

Name change? I like it. Thanks for the line.