True demo. Needs more solid work and refinement.
Intro-sloppy and lots of static in the filter effect. Needs attention.
Synths-Seemed to overpower the drums. Need balancing between the drums and synths to give the song a more tonally stable sound.
Effects-Nice effects, but consider mixing, and how to get the effects working together rather than against each other. There's so much going on that the EQ'ing, panning, and volues really need to be taken into account for the effects to work as well as the entire piece to work.
Bass Synth and Bass Drum-Key for a solid mix. Seems as though they do not compliment each other. They're fighting for the same EQ'ing space, so they blend instead of both sounding meaty and fresh, pacing the tempo for the song.
Music Itself-Very nice. Very repetitive. Work on a more interesting song structure and find new way to arrange the work. Make other ideas and connect them together to create a cohesive thought.
-ImperfectDisciple