Seriously...
The drums were too loud, and that ruined the effect of the song, if you made them slightly quieter, the song would sound so much better. Try to learn how to mix. Balancing out the sounds is all you need to do, everything else is a-okay. The composition strikes me as more than just decent. Turn the bass drum down, a little down on the hi-hat, and a little on the snare, and you'll be a lot better off :D
-Care to check my audio?
-ImperfectDisciple-
What the crap?
You used SLAYER?!?!?!?! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!?!?!?!?!?!
-Actually, the sound of the slayer is pretty tight, I thoroughly enjoyed the sound, just amazing. Rawrthaas = turns crap sound to goodness of the ears.
-Very nice, the drums could be a little less bland though :P
-ImperfectDisciple-
Goodness of the ears indeed
Like-able :D
It's really cool to here, would work nicely in a jungle-themed game (maybe that's what you're doing it for?). Not the most amazing thing out of Eden, but it certainly boasts a catchy beat, it blends into one sound, but is made up of many sounds, which is pretty tight. The wind chimes and the low whistle are pretty cool too, makes it authentic. Are you making a whole song out of this, or just leaving it as a loop? It would sound better if you varied it throughout the course of a whole song, and then have it fade into the song, and then fade out, that'd make a nice loop, not too distracting or anything :D
-Nice job!
-ImperfectDisciple-
Creates an atmosphere...
It's not bad, slightly simplistic in the beat, really doesn't boast much, which can hurt your big transitions a lot. The synths are really nice sounding, especially the LFO automation on them, sounded really nice with the combination of accents. Not the best I've heard, but you're on the right track with your synths, work on creating something more than then generic beat throughout the song, the beat barely changes but in the beginning.
-Nice!
-Would you check my audio?
-ImperfectDisciple-
Hmm...
-Well, it'd be nice if you had a better bass backbone towards the beginning, just slight enough to say it's there, but not too distracting. Otherwise, I'd say this song is pretty tight, really does sound like a chem. reactor, very nice job!
-Mind checking my audio?
-ImperfectDisciple-
I was trying to make a Sorta Build up so thats why i didnt want to Bring the BAss early in the Song
Ty Very MUch for teh Constructive Review i appreciated ty ty
Evilcookies
w00tz :D
-Nice intro, the lead in is just pleasant! The dynamics of the song overall struggle to exaggerate, to bring itself out. Once again, I'll say your transitions overall are just amazing, I love them. Effect are okay too, maybe slightly overdone, but still tight. I was about to say the bass drum needed more kick, but that's 'cause my volume was low :P
-Nice job, hope this wins that contest :D
P.S. Could you check my music?
-ImperfectDisciple
wow thanks for your fast review!
"-Nice job, hope this wins that contest :D"
yeah, this would be great! =)
"P.S. Could you check my music?"
Sure! why not?!
[GF]
Very 80's Remeniscent
Just the overall sound had, at least mostly, an 80's electronica feel. Not a bad thing, of course. The vocals are pretty tight. Maybe a delay effect once on the robot voice as a transition, that'd be tight, or at the end. Yes, right at the end, that'd be a killer ending.
Overall, this is nicely written, I'm not surprised this has a high score (it's really high actually, almost too high >8(
Ha, just kidding. Anyways, I really haven't heard a song this nice for a while, I'm kinda disappointed that it's here though, you should be selling this, the song is worth more. Oh well, your choice, right?
Awesome job, could you check my music please?
-ImperfectDisciple-
it`d be nice to be able to sell my music, rest assured, NG wont be the only outlet for my music. we`d like to make a few more in the same genre tho so we could present it as a band or project before we start hunting for record contracts:)
Wait...
If you hate gabber, why the...I'm not going to ask...
-Interesting, didn't really like the bass drum entirely too much, but the bassy synth was off the hook. The clap was weird too, but whatev.
-The composition isn't one to die for, but it really wants to kill t3h z3r0 v0t3rZ!
-Needs some extension, but overall, I'm fairly pleased, pretty tight :D
-ImperfectDisciple-
roflz, v0t3 t3h 5z0rz 0n my mUzIK????
Very neat!
I really like the quality of the stringed instruments. Really nice. The melody is also really appealing, kinda lulls you :P
My only major complaint (since you have a demo, and I won't like, critique on stuff that's really hard to deal with considering time constraints) is the bass drum. It's a little too punchy. I mean, if you can eliminate the punch of the bass drum, that would be great. You want it to pierce through, but not in an annoying way.
-Really great first song, totally love it :D
-ImperfectDisciple
thx for the review! Kind of hard to work with a demo music mixer, but I had some fun with this song. another problem I really would have liked to fix was that at one point in the song, the strings got louder, but then softer once again. It would be nice to know how to fix those problems in the future...now about the bass drum, would have fixed it, but with the FL demo, as all people using FL Studios should know, I can't save any work, then improve on it later...can't wait to get more money so I can get the real deal! XD thx once again for the supportive review!
haha, true ambience :D
-Tight beat! Some cool little diddles here and there, really appealing.
-Some of the synths come out of the key signature, but I guess you're trying to do that.
-You NEED to improve your transitions, instruments (especially the drums) come in too suddenly, and they come out too suddenly as well.
-Overall, nice sound, work on making your song flow!
-ImperfectDisciple-
-Check my audio!!!-
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.
Drumming & Music
High School
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