itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ DaVinster- Paradise [FULL]]

Okay...

You major problem is the kick drum, it's so dead. It really hurts the theme of the song with its Fruity-ness (cough cough, add FX to the Fruity Loop sample). Also, add some more percussion stuff to it. A driving percussion force is missing and it hurts the song. The synth composition is great, but where's the rest of the show? Get some better samples, google "Breakbeat-Paradise", got some tight drum samples, and add FX, using the mixer, to the bass drum. YES, it can be more bassy : D

-Good try : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the advice, but I made this song in about an hour. I forgot about the other drums :P

[The Grand Adventure Begins]

HAHAHA!

I seriously half expected this to be techno, the progression just make the song sound like it should be that way. The progression is great though. Maybe you should make this techno? I dunno, it's still a cool mix you've produced : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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TheAmateurAnimator responds:

I'm not too good with making real good techno. Give me a while to learn drumloop construction and automation clips(and the tons of other stuff I need to learn). I'm going to have to redo this and add on a few seconds or make a new song with this theme, because it didn't meet the length requirements for the MRAC. So I'll make sure you see the new version!

[E. Allen's Experimental Chaos]

Nice : D

Only problem are the strings. They sound terrible! Try some different chords, or just take those beginning strings out all together. It's a good loop : )

-ImperfectDisciple-

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E-SBP responds:

Thanks, dude! Aw, man, not the strings! Oh noes!!!

[Super Mario Land 2 (+1)]

You're right : D

No one really has done this, but you for the most part. Tight mix, sounds pretty cool : D

-The percussion crash is cheezy, change that.
-Nice synths
-Loops nice
-Nice percussion snares, but more dynamics within the hits. It's pretty good, but more syncopation rather than pitches : P

Very nice : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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CyrusOfNaias responds:

I certainly will. Thanks for the review!

[<R+> Ride on the Sky]

0 whoa!

Dude, this song is really uplifting! The beginning is just insane! Beats my next techno mix out of the water, at least with the synths. I wish I had the knowledge to create those kind of synths, those are the synths I've wanted to hear for a while.

-I know this sounds n00bish, but what program do you use for those synths?

-Some of the drum synths seemed Fruity Looped, didn't match too well. Wait, just the crash cymbal seems that way.

-The mastering is kinda weird at times with the synths and the drums.

-Tight mix, pro quality here : D

-Expand it a little more on the trance side, then make a DnB version : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Rawrthaas responds:

hi disciple.. thanks for reviewing.. A DnB version sounds cool. I use a plug in called z3t4+ for most synths.

[Coldplay 'Clocks' Rave Remix]

Well...

You said...

"I couldn't add the vox because of ng's rules... :("

Solution:

...GO FIND A TALENTED SINGER!!!

-Yeah, that might be hard, but try to anyways : D

-Nice mix : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

[Avatar Theme [Remix AC vs. LL]]

My gosh : 0

-This is an amazing remix you've created here. Just to get this out of the way, I love Avatar, probably my fav. T.V. show (or at least one of them). You've kept the theme of the "theme" of Avatar and still creating a diverse remix that kept the listener on their toes, just amazing, great job man : D

-ImperfectDisciple- (formerly SuperDrummer146)

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[{dj-N} Listen to Your Heart]

Tight!

The only 3 bad things...

-The "goodbye" vocal ruined the beginning.
-The piano samples and drums seem too...Fruity Loop-ish? Some better sampling there is needed!
-Ending was just obliterated by a drum ending.

Otherwise...you're synths seems pretty tight : D
-Automation is okay.
-Bass synth riff really cool.

So, in short...

-Drop vocals.
-Get better piano samples if possible (it's all cool if you can't : D )
-Work on putting FX on drum samples or getting new samples for drums (hi-hat was good though).
-Work on a better beginning and ending...

...and you're set man, nice : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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dj-Nate responds:

Thanks for the constructive review man! Checking your song now.

[R00ts - Pianoforte]

A nice comeback into Newgrounds : D

-The vocals seemed a little distorted.
-The transfer from the synth to the piano wasn't pleasant.
-Ending weird, could have held that out.

Now for the good : D

-Great automation!
-Great drum samples, fit nicely.
-Diggin' the riffs. Is there one main melody, I couldn't tell : P
-Great sound FX

Great job man : D

-ImperfectDisciple- (formerly SuperDrummer146)

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R00ts responds:

Name change? I like it. Thanks for the line.

[Outer Reality]

Tight :D

-Yes, the intro was terrible, maybe an ambient synth beginning, followed with drum fade in?

-Great vocals man, you're zenith of this piece.

-Your transfers were something to ignore, you gotta make them smooth man : D

-The main core is amazing!

-Some synths ruined the overall tone of the song, to get that mood you want, you've got to have synths that support it, much like an idea with supporting facts. Nice try man!

-Freakin' killer vox : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

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stormeagle253609 responds:

thanks, I will ry to improve on the transfers, and the vocals were a part of the program I used, called EJay Techno 2, and I am still new to it, maybe I will get rid of the intro and improve on the transfers, but I agree that the rest is pretty good.