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Great style.

For the people who don't listen to DnB, wooooow. DnB is a broad genre, go listen to the rest of it sometime, eh? ;)

-I really enjoy the ambient aspects brought out in this piece. The drums are relaxing too. The repetitiveness is actually great. It's like a framework. Now, build the peaks and valleys of the roller coaster. Flair here and there, softer parts elsewhere. Make a story. Have fun if you go for that ;)

-ImperfectDisciple

Top notch

Perhaps one of the most professional sounding pieces I've heard on this site since I first logged on. I would imagine this being running away from zombies in a ship in space. Fighting for your life in a fast paced, intenseness that matches nothing else. Nailed it right on the head. Consider this the most genuine 10/10 I've given.

-ImperfectDisciple

Awesome

This is a compliment, so sorry if you don't like your music being compared. It reminded me of F-Zero. It's fast paced, catchy guitar lines, great rhythm. Basically, this is awesome :)

-ImperfectDisciple

Yummmmmm.

Drumwork: Phenomenal. I enjoyed how technically pleasant the drums were.

Intro: Nice. I love the idea there. It does seem a bit too awkward though. The bass synth at the beginning needs to fade down to nothing coming into the next drum hit/delay, and then come back up a little, and then back down for the filter effect. The delay didn't feel long enough as well.

-Otherwise, this rocks!

-ImperfectDisciple

poopr1221 responds:

Thanks for the review man. I have to agree, I never enjoyed my choice for the bass synth, and was trying to find something else I could use, but couldn't. I'll definitely look into that tonight. Thanks for the constructive criticism as well. I feel good getting a drum compliment from an actual drummer. Thanks again.

A very interesting mix. :)

I have not listened to the original, but this is quite the rendition here. Different than the usual game tunage that I'm familiar with. Let's break this down, eh?

-Mixing/Technical Work: Beautiful. It seems like everything that was intended came out nicely. The drums were beautiful in sound. The first hit sounds a bit distorted though. Doesn't make for a great beginning. Could be the speakers though. Look into it though?

-Lovely bass and synth sounds. The drums...idk what to make of them. I love the rhythms, but the drums don't seem to fit the flowing, rich, jungle-like picture. What I mean is this: they stick out. I don't know if that's volume or sound (EQ) stuff.

Music: Enjoyed the synth work, so no comments there.

-Let's talk drums. The entrance at :38 (ish) for the drums was a bit abrupt. Try putting a fill in there to keep the idea of transition going. This is a very flowing piece by the sounds of it. Keep the surprises to a minimum as far as those transitions go.

- :46-48 was rough without any cymbal. This part would be better with a more real drumkit (if not, a real drumkit), but it doesn't stand out with sampled drums. Add more rhythmic cymbal hits, keep the flowing pace going.

-The drums going out were great. It was abrupt, but the drum fill really made the transition natural, and then that heavy bass hit said "yes, we're done."

-Overall: Lovely stuff going here. I always find something amazing in your stuff.

-ImperfectDisciple

Rawrthaas responds:

Thanks man. Didn't notice the beginning.

Makes a cloudy day brighter.

Thanks.

-ImperfectDisciple

scoutzero responds:

np :)

Welcome to the Club!

of AWESOMENESS :D

yummy

-My only beef is the snare drum. It needs to be darker, more warlike, less like a popcorn snare. However, this is some beast music. I think you should add suspended cymbal swishes where necessary. Nice job dude :)

-ImperfectDisciple

sorohanro responds:

Thanx for review and feedback.
Soon I'll put a different mix up, with some improvement on trumpet (due to nathanallenpinard's review and his link to SIR1 reverb) and your opinion on the percussion.

Needs more dynamic work especially, but nice.

Dynamics: The contrasting volumes and contrasting drive of a song. Music has to go somewhere, even if it's electronic-based. Try different things.

-Intro: Great! Simple, but effective.
-Getting into it: nice fill to come into the next idea, but put small variations in between for more contrast and fun.
-Ending: a good transition point. I like the contrast it gave.

Style: Well, I'm a sucker for noise-electronica. However, I think it could be more sporatic and crazy. NOT LOUD AND MORE GRITTY. More crazy fills, more glitch effects, etc. Put those in!

Mixing: I like the distortedness, really nice. Perhaps a more driving bass drum would be interesting XD

Overall: Sweet, but experiment and have some fun with it. It's kinda straight-forward. Play this tune with more variation and effects/fills that catch the ear, and this groovin' gold.

-ImperfectDisciple

Pivvot responds:

Why thank you for the constructive criticism! I shall use it wisely!

Constructive comments, but no crapping, sorry :P

Melody-Extremely awesome, but it seems like there's a slight blip in the melody occasionally. Look into that and make sure the melody flows more cohesively if that is the goal of the music.

Mixing-3/4's of the way there. I really like it. Needs some more refinement. It seems really basic. The melodic synths are great. The rest could be more meaty.

Intro-Needs to be the first 13 seconds only. It's kind boring after that.

Effects-Next to none, makes the song feel like it's going nowhere. Work on more transition effects especially, those make a song more appealing and tasteful.

-Overall: Good. Needs more refinement and creativity. Experiment! Test the limits, and have fun :)

-ImperfectDisciple

X3850 responds:

Thanks! I'll try to keep that stuff in mind next song!

ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.

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