Not bad, not bad : )
Bad Things
-Really repetitive.
-A little too cliche for a creepy intro, not too creepy, but just too generic.
Good Things
-Awesome clarity!
-I don't say much 'cause you could easily improve. Get some free plugins (www.kvraudio.com has some good free ones), and work hard, don't take only one day, take a week or two, that'll do yah good : )
SuperDrummer146
Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Good start!
Bad Things
-Very repetitve! It changes up on the percussion, but there really is nothing more than that, so I don't think I can uphold that this song is really technical :'(
Good Things
-Great clarity!
-Pretty unique song. Nice job on percussion. Sounded kinda like the Linkin' Park Jam Session!
-K00LN355!
SuperDrummer146
Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Well...
Bad Things
-All you did was take some random sounds and loops and stick them together. All you used was the Fruity Loops program. Expand your boundaries, and get some plugins. They'll do you well. And take some time to make a real composition, something that's yours : )
Good Things
-Well, at least the clarity was good : )
-Good try, and at least take some time on your songs, 'cause if you're looking to get big, this won't cut it. But you can do it : )
SuperDrummer146
Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Hmm...
Not bad, not bad...
Bad Things
-All you did was arrange a bunch of loops you didn't make. As you'll find out, this really isn't your music in your sense. You didn't make it your own, you made it a song of other people's loops. Go forth, take a risk, and try to make your own instrumentals, not use something that you didn't make. I know this must hurt, so I apologize, but if you're gonna do any good, just go and do your best and do it yourself. Ask others for help, but don't use stuff that you didn't make in your feelings.
-Clarity wasn't the best.
Good Things
-Okay composition.
-Look, I used to think that putting GarageBand loops to make "your own song" was the coolest thing for a while, but I realize now that when I made it my own, making music was more fun, and more enjoyable. Keep at it man, keep at it : )
SuperDrummer146
Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Tight track! 5/5!
Bad Things
-This isn't "your" track, if you know what I mean.
-The high pitched side of the song was too high pitched, tone it down an octave or two, and see the kool results.
Good Things
-Tight backround
-Good Clarity
-I so remember this game from when I was like, 8-10, or something like that. You did an awesome job remixing it. Pretty sweet dude, pretty sweet.
-SuperDrummer146
Thanks for your comments.
Cool!
Bad Things
-Drums are very hard to record, so you might want to do some research on how to get a better drum recording. There are various sites on the internet for this, so google will be your friend. To be honest, I have problems with drum recording too, so you're not alone.
Good Things
-Very creative song, captured the theme of the song very nicely, and the violin is a very nice touch. Makes you feel like christmas in the florida keys or something. And sorry about saying that those jazz pieces sounded country-ish because of the strings, it's just my opinion, so go figure that it's bad : P
-After the drum, very nice clarity.
-Awesome that you play at these instruments!
-Great job!
-SuperDrummer146
Me likey!
Bad Things
-Funny how I've never heard this song ever. Either way, since this is a remix, I strongly encourage that you make it your own, be creative, make it how you want it, not after the shape of the original entirely.
Good Things
-Great choice of synths and samples!
-You worked pretty hard on this.
-You chose a good song to remix, as this has lots of great breaks and the sort.
-Great job!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Wow...
I didn't think making a song this good wsa ever possible, nice job! Sorry that you have to go through the crap that one person downloaded your song 1000 times, that's gotta suck : (
Bad Things
-I assume that this was made for a flash, if not, it's got that style. But it still seems too empty. It needs a vocal backing, not like singing, but a church choral sample in the backround at certain times to get a certain effect.
-This isn't a bad thing necessarily, but maybe you could make this a DnB styled song? It would sound very cool with that fast paced feeling, and you could add certain effects to make it really cool!
Good Things
-Easy to remember melody
-Great clarity!
-I felt that this piece wasn't like very many other musical pieces out there, so good on yah.
-You obviously put a lot of time into this song.
-Great job!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my muzik! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15
Thank you for your comments.
Uh...
You seemed yo suffer a little more on this song.
Bad Things
-Clarity seems a little bad with the drums. Did you actually put in real drumset? That's what it sounds like. If so, that's one of the hardest things in the world to record, so good try : )
-Once more, it's not really your own. I wanna hear something that YOU made : )
Good Things
-The samples sounded nice.
-The violin makes it sound more country-ish though, XD
-Good try, but this isn't your best, keep at it though!
-SuperDrummer146
Actually, I PLAYED all the instruments, and recorded it with my logitech microphone. Do you really think that everything with a violin is country?? Anyway, thank you for your reviews.
XD
This could easily go into a quiz game for Zelda stuff, it would sound very nice!
-Bad Things
-Just the sheer repetitiveness
-Good Things
-The ending blew me away, I like how you at least create your own ending. Now create your own breaks in the middle and your own intro, and we'll be rollin'!
-Nice styling!
-Awesome clarity!
-Just make it your own, that's all you have to do now!
-SuperDrummer146
-Thanks for liking my muzik, feel free to drop a review at any time!
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