itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death of a Super Hero]

\m/_Getting There!_\m/

YAY!

This is definitely an improvement. The piece is pretty diverse considering your time limit to make such a piece. Tends to have an extremely dynamic feel with all the stuff you've put into the song. With just some presets, you've created a very nicely thought-out piece for such a quick put together.

Not so yay...

Not the best sounding drum samples, but a good set for a run like this. You'll learn to make great drum samples and the sort with time, research on your part, and working for money to buy whatever you'll need (research what you want to buy ; )

-Kinda repetitive in a sense, taking more time with a full version of FL will do yah some good, since you can save : )

-Great effort! Keep this up!!!

TorkKey responds:

At least its an improvement!!!

I am saving up for the full and I hope to get the "Producer Edition" ($150).

Ya it does get repetitive... (oops)... And it would be great to save.
(Damn demo's...)

Thx for the review and ALL of the support that wou've given me!!!
<TorkKey

ps- I take donations ;)

pss- jk(sort of)

[Damned Pancakes]

\m/_Getting There!_\m/

YAY!

Nice guitar riffs and incorporation of comedy!

Not so yay...

The song seemed glitchy, it would cut in and out, seeming like a rigid gap in between certain riffs and so on. Get some good heavy metal drum samples and a software music maker for the computer so you can incorporate drums, that's pretty much a core that you're missing for heavy metal.

-You can do it, work for it : )

-SuperDrummer146-

Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15

DesertVulture responds:

hey, someone reviewed my song, that's awesome!

But seriously, the "gaps" are techniques of mine. I like those, but some people don't. They were intentional. This isn't the final version. I have no idea how to play the drums, and I don't know how to use FL6, so yeah. I'll put some drums in it and give your music a look.

[Fun Fun Fun All Day Long Song]

\m/_Not there yet!_\m/

YAY!

At least you're interested in music making!

Not so yay...

You're using basic GarageBand loops to make a song, and you're not using "you", per se, to make the music. When you compose your own loops, or melodies and basslines, and sounds, you get yourself into the music. The sole purpose of music is to express feeling, and with this, you can't do that.

-Keep trying man! Just keep researching, asking questions to audio regulars in the Audio BBS, research music making programs just as Fruity Loops and Reason, and maybe even GarageBand more to see how you can make your OWN loops, melodies and the whatnot. You'll get it man, you'll get it!

-SuperDrummer146-

Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15

mikenuzzo responds:

I can make audio now, since i've learned bass and sax, but sadly i dont have the program anymore.

[Super Mario Underworld Theme]

\m/_Good!_\m/

YAY!

It's more peppy than other versions I've listened to. The drum groove is kickin', it's like, wow, tight. Sounds used overall were nice. Good clarity as well! Nice little blips in the second half of the loop.

Not so yah...

It's an okay remix, but not entirely enough to call it "new/polished". You take the whole thing apart, and reorganize it to the real remix you want it to sound like.

Overall, pretty good : )

-SuperDrummer146-

Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
15

Plasmatic responds:

thanks dood. dreamerz series has some serious potential there! thanks for the review. i love the blips

[O HOLY NIGHT! [Pre-Version]]

Nice start : )

Your getting there, but you've got to push it hard, and I mean HARD to get this any better. The mixing of the main synths sucks butt, the mixing itself just sucks, get that down PRONTO!!! Nice composition though : )

Keep working at it with all your heart man!

-SuperDrummer146-

D-A-J responds:

Well, like i said, this is the first version, that is gonna be finnished bout time to christmas :) as a christmas-special...

[-[ Beatdown Loop ]-]

Hmm...

Yes, the drum beat lacks. In the beginning, that's okay, but then, remember to have that light tap percussion thing going with a nice steady drum beat. That would kick the song a little nicer.

_TIGHT!_

DSMagnum responds:

This was just some experimental stuff and it only took me about 2 hours. Not one of my greater works, but I thought it was worthy of being put in the portal.

Thanks for reviewing.

[~{ Car Commercial Song }~]

Hmm...

Diversity: Not many instruments present, and the song is really short. Maybe add some more futuristic elements to the song.

Clarity: Your stringed instrument with teh melody sounds too, well "Plucked." Smooth out the sound slightly.

-SuperDrummer146-

DSMagnum responds:

Well, I was trying to go for a Popish Rock song, like in a Nissan car commercial I've been seeing lately. I know that it didn't start off too well with there only being one instrument, but it was too late to change anything when I noticed. I was originally aiming for something around 45 seconds for the song, and have it balanced out a little more, but I was sorta rushing to get this finished. As for the plucked feel, I thought it sounded fine, but maybe I should've thought twice about that. All the instruments I used were presets, which was probably a bad idea. I'll have to remember these things the next time I do a piece like this.

Thanks for reviewing!

[-[ HailFIRE Peaks ]-]

YOU FREAKIN' FREAK!!!

YOU MESSED UP TEH SONG AND IT REALLY SUKZ BUTT MAN, I MEAN, SERIOUSLY COMON YOU LAZY JERK!!!1!1!1!!

...jk...very nice song, I love it 110% : )

-SuperDrummer146-

DSMagnum responds:

Thanks man! I'll get around to reviewing you soon.

[Derailed]

Hmm....

Well, MaestroRage (a very knowledge-able guy, don't be afraid to ask the guy some questions in eagerness to learn) has pretty much discussed what needs to be. I must say though, your musical composition is tight, keep that up!

\m/_SuperDrummer146_\m/

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Falling Into Time"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
41

Darthfett responds:

Hey buddy. I didn't know it was you :P

After being around a while, I now know what a great composer MaestroRage is. Thanks for the advice ;D

Your music is great, keep going!
~Darthfett

[a new riff]

ooh!

Nice riff, I really like it. It has that classical 6/8 rock feel to it, cool. I would try to do drums, but with marching band, school, and the sort...it's a LOT.

NICE JOB!!!

\m/_SuperDrummer146_\m/

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Falling Into Time"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
41

mhb responds:

thanx man. i'll check your song now.