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Much improvement needed...

Graphics: Pretty good, although you could increase the framerate just a tad bit.

Style: Nice Storyline, flowed well.

Sound: An overall dissapointment. You need a WHOLE LOT more sound effects, the music alone just doesn't cut it. Here are some sounds that would need to be added.

-Explosions
-Talking
-Sword (taking out of sheeth, stabbing, etc.)

Please take more time to add sound effects, this put a big dent into your score.

Violence-It was in there, and animated okay.

Interactivity and Humor-n/a

Hope to see major improvements as the series goes on.

-SuperDrummer146

LordDF responds:

Thanks for the review. Sound would be nice, but I just don't have the sound resources to make it work right.

Wow!

Thats pretty good. It's definitely a flash that deserves to be on Newgrounds. Here's some explanations on my ratings.

Graphics: Not too bad, though in two particular parts, the frame rate all of the sudden slowed down considerably.

Style: Good original flash.

Violence:

Sound: Great music, bad sound effects, needs to be much better on sound effects.

Violence: Not much of it, but it was very well animated.

Interactivity: Play button.

Humor: Some parts made me laugh a little, but otherwise, not much humor since this is somewhat serious.

Great job! You're definitely on your way to making great flash movies! Hope to see more from you soon : )

Galenlome responds:

Yeah that's the problem with cramming the .fla with so much graphic intensive scenes.
I ended up having to half the animation and carry on in a whole .fla, which is why some bits may seem a little off or not the right colour, etc.
But thankyou for your extensive review.

Pretty cool...

I wasn't totally impressed, but it was fun to watch. Good luck with your future productions!!!

Champu responds:

thanks!

Best Parody Ever!

One thing though. Add a skip button at the trix rabbit justice ad. It gets annoying to watch it before the real action. Otherwise, great job! Keep up the good work!

rtil responds:

the skip button might be a good idea, i see your point. i have to re-compile this flash every day for this and that so i might release a later NG version w/ the skip button.

So want this to come out now.

Looks very cool compared to other flash trailers I've seen. Good job!

brocco3 responds:

Thank you sir.

Truely stands out!

This flash over-achieves other lock flashes by far. Nice job. Hope you get front page and daily feature.

Robot-Lock responds:

Heartwarming review :) Thank you very much.

Come on!

It's obvious you've submitted a cartoon that you put heads onto. What a disgrace...

Not bad, needs work though.

Maybe the stick figures can be drawn as robots or plastic army men? It's not bad though.

VisaB responds:

ok ill keep that in mind

Very good.

I thought this was a really good flash. I also liked your 5 Shades of Brown Collab. Keep up the good work.

JKR responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked both this and the "Please Don't Feed the Squirrels" entry of mine in Shades of Brown. If you haven't yet, you may want to check out the Shades of Blue entry and the cartoons at FredtheMonkey.com. Maybe you'll like them too! Thanks again for the nice comments!

okay.

i don't see how this kind of stuff gets by, but is was kind of funny when you put all the different "bills" at the end.

Frankiedaman responds:

ah yeah that's just one of my amazing trickerys that i decided to put in my flash.

ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.

Drumming & Music

High School

Somewhere out there...

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