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-This is pretty tight for your first submission! The beginning and all that was pretty tight. Your buildups need to be a little more involved to be as long as you made them, but they were pretty fun. The main melody and the bass groove was pretty tight. I dunno, I was thinking 80's techno? Either way, it was pretty good.
-You might want to look out and try not to use sounds/synths that don't sound nicely with your other synths, it turns people off when it just doesn't sound right. Most of the synths were pretty good, but some just didn't mix.
-You also might want to look at song structure. Listen to music that you like, and pick stuff up from it, and play around with it, you never know where you'll go : )
-Great job, check out my techno and rate/review it, prefered that you rate it 'cause I'm fighting teh zero voters. But whatever you want to do, lol.
-Great job on an awesome song.
-SuperDrummer146