\m/_OHMYFREAKINGOSH!_\m/
My turn to review you : D
-Certainly an awesome song, digging the dynamics, but like OCON said, maybe a really big boost at the end would really send this over the edge?
-Loving the main melody : D
-Overall, this song is seriously really cool!
-SuperDrummer146-
Thanks for the review dude. I might submit a longer version some day
\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/
Wow, you're getting much better, here's some more things to think about.
-Nice solo melody, truly impressive
-Make the piano feel more dance-like, with more than just whole notes, make it busier by hitting down the same chord more than once in the groove time it has. I really don't know how to explain it too well, make it groove better!
-Dude, you're improving at high rates of speed, only other thing that kinda irked me was that the solo instrument wasn't sustained enough, and it didn't say around long enough, as soon as you put that solo thing in, let it go through to the end of the song. Maybe at the point you ended the solo, make that synth take the place of the piano in chords, and let the piano rip it : D
-SuperDrummer146-
yea, i probably should have used that saw more. but then i think it would be too repeitive and none loop-like, i wanted that to the kinda apex to the loop.
\m/_Getting There!_\m/
Of course, this is a demo, so you'll bring in those quality elements in there.
Some ideas include...
Exaggerating you dynamics more, after the main build, it's the same dynamic level the whole time. Make at least one really low point, and build it up to a high point at that end that just makes the crowd go wild!!!
Make your high points REALLY high though, like, on your first build, it kinda just hit the mark, but it wasn't all that fun and pleasant.
The sound quality is very nice man, keep it up : D
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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HEYHEY!
Tight mix, I like the slicing you did! Do you have Fruity Loops 6? If so, could I collab more onto it? I've got a couple of ideas on the song that'll add to mixing up the dynamics with other Windows sounds.
-Either way, tight track : )
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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Yeh feel free to add more
Look...
That was one of the crappiest loops I've ever heard. It skipped all the time, and the mixing quality was TERRIBLE! Never before have I seen such a poor job done before. N00b...
Lol, jk! This is one the most PERFECT loops for a boss battle I've ever seen. I kinda see a light based machine getting itself pumped for battle. The loop also is seamless, which isn't usually seen here on Newgrounds! Nice : D
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/
Uh, wow, seriously, I don't see why you get more recognization around here. That's some tight talent you've got there! Killer song!
Maybe set this as a verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/chorus/end type thing? I see you eventually get to a break within the song, but maybe a verse type of thing to go in between choruses? You've got a TIGHT ending, that was great!
Otherwise, this is seriously one of the best pieces I've come across on Newgrounds : D
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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Thanks for the honest review!
Maybe i will build a bridge before the chorus! Good idea for that!
I am very proud of this song, because it is my first guitar recording. (as i said in my comment.)
Check out my other stuff here! I would recommend "Kim - 42 Deep Thoughts".
It didn't get so much feedback here on NG and i think it deserves a bit more!
I will check your stuff and review them.. but later!
So thanks!
Review more please! :D
\m/_OHMYFREAKINGOSH!_\m/
I like, half expected you to have something techno-ish, but no, I'm mistaken! The vocals at the beginning were tight. I however, felt that some of the instrumentation wasn't pleasing to the ear.
-Your strings, guitar, and piano didn't have a good sustain to them, it seemed choppy when you had long periods of time between notes. It's kinda like being out of shape, and playing a simple little game, as I'll now illustrate.
Each person can pass the ball from one guy to the next in short distances, but as the ball has to be carried a longer distance, it gets harder to carry, and so you drop it.
Add more sustain to the notes, it'll help the flow of the song (or the game) ^-^
-Otherwise, it was very nice, keep it up. By the way, could you review one of my "Dreamerz" songs?
-SuperDrummer146-
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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\m/_Getting There!_\m/
+The melodies and the main synths make this quite the interesting little dreamy track
+Lots of psychedelic feeling, like...drugs? I dunno, never tryed drugs, that's the impression I get
+Vocals? Weird...
-Your bass drum just killed this song! It's so whimpy! For rave, I expected "BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM!" and at least a 4.5 earthquake to erupt within my room, but I heard this "boom boom, hehehehe, boom...erm...boom...is that good enough?"
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NO IT ISN'T
-Alright, so maybe I when too far being stupid with that, but you get the idea. Kick up the bass drum : )
-Nice job, just work on that one aspect!
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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hey thanks man.
I tried to make the kick more "BOOM", except, sadly, it distorted the other synths etc. Thanks for review man!
nova
\m/_Getting There!_\m/
+Great beginning, I love your drum mixes : )
-The actual sound of the drum samples are "preset-ish", Fruity Loops, I think?
+ & - I was wondering when you'd bring that freakin' melody, I love that one out of most of the songs in LoZ!
+Nice percussion break in the middle of the song.
-Some of the syncopated drum beats aren't good in the chorus, maybe slightly syncopated, but otherwise at least a kick drum on the downbeats.
+Good composition.
Nice dude! Keep at it!
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series! Take a review or vote : )
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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\m/_Not there yet!_\m/
Ah-HA! You're the really good sprite artist posting your VG-mixes around, okay : )
+Peaceful, and serene
-Your main instrument is WAY too loud man, turn it down!
-There isn't much going on. You use midi files to make this, or your own self-ideas?
You'll get better by learning more about the program you're using, keep striving to learn : )
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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