itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paradise on E ZENON REMIX]

Yeah!

Originality: Sorry if the rating offends you, but the core song is from BOUNC3, but that's okay, it's a remix. Not really hardcore, but it's got some killer sounds!

Diversity: Craziness! Sounds mixed in everywhere! The tempo change was cool, but take this into your mind, you placed the change in such an aquard place that it really wasn't pleasing, maybe a standard measure before that change. The tempo change back into the normal tempo was great!!!

Clarity: Good, though it seemed wierd how you balanced the sounds, they came out pretty well!

Effort: Lot's of it!!!

Overall: 1337!!! Keep up the fantastic work. A fantastic original, a fantastic remix!

PERVOK responds:

Awesome, thanks for the detailed review :)

[_-=[Flying Unmatched]=-*FIXED*]

Interesting...

Originality: Wow, an interesting concept. Techno and classical. Really sweet and fun to listen to. It has a flavor of some type of ultra-samuri feel to it.

Diversity: The instrument seemed to be very well used. The voices once more seemed to intermingle with each other very well. It's as if techno and classic are meant to be mixed together.

Clarity: I'm really surprised here, in a bad way. The intrument used to start the song is way too loud, needs to be slightly quieter. It seemes that your flute sticks out too much. It overlaps the backround too much and seems to be almost too independent of the song. Quiet this intrument as well.

Effort: Good, but more still could have been done.

Overall: Keep toying around with this idea, I really like it alot : )

MaestroSorrow responds:

heh, still not bad for a first attempt huh? Don't worry, when I feel I have mastered the orchestral field, I plan to fully dive into the techno world.

[_-=[Claiming the Heavens]=-_]

Stop doing so well!!!

Lol, just kidding...

Originality: A typical medival sound, but it's beefed up in the sense that it can really speak a story. More than one story comes to mind, but only with much thought. The first story that pops into mind would be that of a knight that lost his friend in battle, yet all his still within him, he lacks a sense of revenge. This is pretty cool.

Diversity: Could be changed around a little more, but with all the instuments going on, it's almost un-noticable. It flows so well, and there is lots of voice to it, with one instrument calling to another.

Clarity: Greatness, except for a certain part in your piece where a bass instrument (or part) seemes to drown out the melody. Otherwise, it's cool.

Effort: Yes!

Overall: Great job, this is a classic, in genre and in sound. Hope to see more from you : )

MaestroSorrow responds:

I have several more samples, filtering through my little mind, but I have to finish this up first ^^. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Many thanks for the review.

[R__'*'Sorr0w'*']

Alright....

Originality: Didn't enjoy the melody that much, and it seemed to be unstable (more under clarity) , yet the melody was very effective. Creative transitions were also noticable.

Diversity: Smooth transitions and intermingling of the melody and other synths were very well done, though it could have been better.

Clarity: Arrg!!! Lower the pitch of the melody, it's pretty, but ear piercing. Also, it didn't seem that the melody was in sync at times, make sure it has a steadier flow to it.

Effort: Good, but so much more can be done.

Overall: Good luck with future productions. This isn't the greatest stuff ever, but it shows a door of promise to the next level!

Rawrthaas responds:

Ear piercing...hmm, I'm not getting it, but I made a lot of songs with high notes on my previous accounts...However, I see that the highness of the string notes may be found irritating at some points.

Thanks for the review!

R__

[Solus-Zero]

Niiice!!!

Originality: That is the greatest intro I've ever heard from a song. A great transition into the song, but it was kinda bland/unnew from there.

Diversity: Great in some parts, but bad in others, especially that melody you fit in at 1:45, it doesn't fit in right. I know you were probably going for some type of effect here, but it wasn't done well. Some of the build-ups to the climaxes could be shortened, like the one starting at about 2:21, it was too long, as in that it didn't rise in power and complexion fast enough. To be honest, I got bored of the climax because it made me think that it wasn't going to ever finish.

Clarity: Good

Effort: The beginning alone shows great effort and work, the rest could have been done better.

Conclusion: Great job, overall, I really enjoyed it : )

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[mhb - try and fail]

Sweet, but it needs drums...

...which I would be happy to help out with. Maybe we could do a colab? Just an idea, I can play drums, but it might sound wierd because of my mics. Anyways, to the muzik...

-Great melodies, the intertwining of them was fun to listen to. Has a serious "out of my way" kind of attitude to it.

-Lots of diversity between guitars.

-I have to say though, sometimes, certain guitar parts were hard to here, it would be nice to here certain guitar parts compared to others at certain parts.

-Overall, great job. Keep it up! Reply if you want me to make drums for this, because I'd be happy to.

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NGAudioArtists responds:

this is mhb. the song has drums. it's just hard to hear 'em 'cause to eq this piece was a bitch. but i would be more than happy to do a collab with you. send me an e-mail at [e-mail] with the topic as superdrummer146 so i know it's you. i got a lot of songs made up that i need drums for so if you're willin' to collab on more than one track that would be great. as for this song i'm gonna leave it as is 'cause this isn't the real version of the song anyways. this is more like a half-assed dance remix. but let me know if you're interested.

[-WV- Februeeze (Contest cut)]

w00t!

Originality: You used a pretty basic trance beat, but you spiced it up and mixed it in with the melodies very nicely.

Diversity: Pretty diverse, lol. I like how the melody intertwines with the bass eventually, it sounds terrific. Though it would be nice if the melody was changed up a little more. It has three variations, but those are also very similar.

-The drums are not that deep, and it would be nice to see those pumped up more. They would really add depth to the song, especially with some of the great fills that you had, although they were quiet.

-Finally, for this section, I like the transition to loop back to the beginning of the song, it really adds great flow and smoothness to the song.

Clarity: Once more, some of the great drum parts were not heard. In my opinion, that's like half the song. Otherwise, the rest of the song is great in its clarity : )

Effort: Lots of it!

-Great job, hope to see more from you!

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[ZENON-Cathedral]

One of my favorite from you!

Alright, I'll listen to your song and review in order to help me help you with a good review : )

-The beginning reflect much of your previous works. An "amazon" ruin feel to it. It begins to dramatically build up with a "Lord of the Rings" climax battle feel. A lot of great feels to it.
The only problem here is you never really build up to a great climax, which really bums me out. That's okay though. It makes me think of a battle at a church, like another reviewer has talked about.

-All your instruments really blend in well.

-Not much to say after that...okay, I would say more, but I don't have time to. Great job, and keep up the good work : )

-SuperDrummer146

[Under Dark Skies]

Coolness!

As many can now see, I liketh to review and listen to the music at the same time.

-A stringed intrument starts it off. A nice melody as it breaks into the drums and bassy parts. The bass is to "bassic", it needs a little more diversity. The piano is well developed and seems to have many complicated, for lack of better words, "fill-melodies", it fills in at parts as it comes back in. Pretty sweet.

-The synths seems pretty cool. They have a nice sound to it, and help to come back into the main part of the song. I'm slighly dissapointed that the synths didn't go into a more climaxed section, really bumed me out, hoping for something cool.

-You really could have done more with the drums, they seemed, um, how to say it, bland. It needs more variety.

-This has more of a Video Game feel to it, Final Fantasy 7 like.

-I like the ending, the nice "Dark Moon" feel in my opinion. Keep it up : )

-SuperDrummer146

[LI Twinkle Twinkle Little Star]

Dude!

Wow, really is great. I will listen and review at the same time.

-The beginning has a simple melody. This does distract from the overall quality of what your piece really does, but it is flawless. That effect at that last note playing it through the first time is cheesy, though funny. I think it should be taken out, but at the same time, I can see why you put it there. It helps with transition. And the effect helps later on in the music.

-After the second time, and with what seems like a duet-thing going with two melodies inter-twining, you begin with the backround strings. It makes it seem cartoony-imperial-castle like, something like Super Mario. The strings give it added depth, though it would be nice if it were deeper.

-It went back to just piano, a great transition. The strings come back in to stride on through to the end. Another great transition. The piano ending with some frech horns (i think, correct if wrong) is great, gives a deep ending.

-Overall, this is a great victory song with some hints of classical composition. Keep it up!

-SuperDrummer146