Adagio Espressivo Cantabile Greatness!
Don't worry about that other review, he's zero-ing everyone's submissions, which is kinda dumb.
-The truth is, this is a killer song, and I think it's the best one yet, the melody is just so sweet and touching. Reminds me of a part in a movie where something sad has happened, something horrible, something like that : )
-The violin really has a great effect, though it could have a little variety starting off, it is corrected later. This instument is also very touching, more of a warm feeling.
-More strings added to it just now, if you can't tell, I'm listening and reviewing. Wow, it adds such dark complexion at the part, like the conflict has been resolved. The strings are out, and the two characters that were in conflict are going their separate ways on things. Though the conflict has been resolved, the characters never wish to see each other again. Or that's what I got out of it...
-Very theatrical piece indeed. It would have been nicer if maybe you made the resolve much deeper, more darkness to it. It makes you climax worth it a lot more.
-Nothing wrong with notes. It is nice to be a little knit-picky about dynamics, cresendos and decresendos. I see it there, but it isn't developed, there needs to be more to it in order to establish that fine story that goes on in your head so that it creates feeling in the music. That's what can make your audience respond to how your song is made up.
-Overall, this does send me a great sorrow, a sweet sorrow. A true classic indeed. Keep up the outstanding work!
-SuperDrummer146
