Score: 10

"Look..."

submission: Look at the light (Loop)

date: November 4, 2006

That was one of the crappiest loops I've ever heard. It skipped all the time, and the mixing quality was TERRIBLE! Never before have I seen such a poor job done before. N00b...

Lol, jk! This is one the most PERFECT loops for a boss battle I've ever seen. I kinda see a light based machine getting itself pumped for battle. The loop also is seamless, which isn't usually seen here on Newgrounds! Nice : D

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Score: 9

"\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/"

submission: Kim - Blood Field *DEMO*

date: November 4, 2006

Uh, wow, seriously, I don't see why you get more recognization around here. That's some tight talent you've got there! Killer song!

Maybe set this as a verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/chorus/end type thing? I see you eventually get to a break within the song, but maybe a verse type of thing to go in between choruses? You've got a TIGHT ending, that was great!

Otherwise, this is seriously one of the best pieces I've come across on Newgrounds : D

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Score: 9

"\m/_OHMYFREAKINGOSH!_\m/"

submission: *Inuyasha* / ZeRo BaSs

date: November 2, 2006

I like, half expected you to have something techno-ish, but no, I'm mistaken! The vocals at the beginning were tight. I however, felt that some of the instrumentation wasn't pleasing to the ear.

-Your strings, guitar, and piano didn't have a good sustain to them, it seemed choppy when you had long periods of time between notes. It's kinda like being out of shape, and playing a simple little game, as I'll now illustrate.

Each person can pass the ball from one guy to the next in short distances, but as the ball has to be carried a longer distance, it gets harder to carry, and so you drop it.

Add more sustain to the notes, it'll help the flow of the song (or the game) ^-^

-Otherwise, it was very nice, keep it up. By the way, could you review one of my "Dreamerz" songs?

-SuperDrummer146-
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Score: 7

"\m/_Getting There!_\m/"

submission: [BH] {Lifeforms} [2:06]

date: November 2, 2006

+The melodies and the main synths make this quite the interesting little dreamy track
+Lots of psychedelic feeling, like...drugs? I dunno, never tryed drugs, that's the impression I get
+Vocals? Weird...
-Your bass drum just killed this song! It's so whimpy! For rave, I expected "BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM!" and at least a 4.5 earthquake to erupt within my room, but I heard this "boom boom, hehehehe, boom...erm...boom...is that good enough?"

...

NO IT ISN'T

-Alright, so maybe I when too far being stupid with that, but you get the idea. Kick up the bass drum : )

-Nice job, just work on that one aspect!

-SuperDrummer146-
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Score: 7

"\m/_Getting There!_\m/"

submission: GerudoValley Remix

date: November 1, 2006

+Great beginning, I love your drum mixes : )
-The actual sound of the drum samples are "preset-ish", Fruity Loops, I think?
+ & - I was wondering when you'd bring that freakin' melody, I love that one out of most of the songs in LoZ!
+Nice percussion break in the middle of the song.
-Some of the syncopated drum beats aren't good in the chorus, maybe slightly syncopated, but otherwise at least a kick drum on the downbeats.
+Good composition.

Nice dude! Keep at it!

-SuperDrummer146-

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Score: 4

"\m/_Not there yet!_\m/"

submission: Super Mario Land 2 - Overworld

date: November 1, 2006

Ah-HA! You're the really good sprite artist posting your VG-mixes around, okay : )

+Peaceful, and serene
-Your main instrument is WAY too loud man, turn it down!
-There isn't much going on. You use midi files to make this, or your own self-ideas?

You'll get better by learning more about the program you're using, keep striving to learn : )

-SuperDrummer146-

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Score: 9

"\m/_Tight!_\m/"

submission: A Familiar Blanket of Snow

date: November 1, 2006

+Dynamics are very nicely used throughout the song.
-I don't like how much of the song is strings, maybe add a fuller ensemble?
+Composed very nicely my friend : )
+The feeling is very well attained.
+ & - The tempo changes are slightly weird at first, but they kinda grew on me throughout the song, very nice.
+ & - Using the GPO recording, it seems as though some elements are lost in the mixing compared to your first recording.

Wow dude, very nice!

-SuperDrummer146-

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Score: 5

"\m/_Not there yet!_\m/"

submission: C3ntauri0n - Electronik

date: November 1, 2006

+Some good percussion grooves!
-The snare build wasn't needed for EVERY fill, come on now : |
+You've seemed to finally build the song up to something worthy with the synth instruments.
-Why do the synth instruments cut out on the snare build? Work that out, the flow of the song is ruined when you do that, keep the synths going.
-Same basic beat used every time, but...
+Yes, it's catchy : )

-Look, you've got lots of potential, develop it! Someone could fall asleep halfway through the song since you take so long to build it up. Keep trying, you'll get it!

-SuperDrummer146-

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Score: 8

"\m/_Has Potential!_\m/"

submission: DJ Comet-Aqua Zone

date: November 1, 2006

+Nice mysterious beginning.
-Don't like that bubbly/gooey/swamp-like synth you've got going, it doesn't fit the better feeling that could be present. Maybe a long, heavy bass sound. The composition for that part wasn't bad though, keep that the same.
+ & - The vocal thing you've got going is nice and percussive, but it's too short, and it sounds terrible with that dreamy/airy break beat thing you've got going on. Extend it, or make it long and authoritative.
+The rest of the mixing of instruments is very nicely done.
-Could have been more dynamic contrast later in the song, but not bad overall.

You've been developing very nicely man, keep it up!

-SuperDrummer146-

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Score: 8

"\m/_Yummy!_\m/"

submission: Contact (carbo)

date: November 1, 2006

+Nice use of dynamics right at the beginning and setting that good tone to give the listener interest.
-Some of your lead synths may work better with more staccato, less sustain to each note. The bass instrument is okay with that slight sustain, and the sustain on the notes is good in some place, but in the main choruses, it really isn't as necessary since you want to keep the song jumpy. This could be your style though, in which case, I apologize if that is so, then this would be a fault in my part.
+Nice vocals!
-Why does the song just stop? Make an ending to it! It sound incomplete, your story isn't done yet! The hero desperately tries to slay the dragon, and just as that's about to happen, the screen on the T.V goes black, show over. That isn't really the best ending for this kind of song. Maybe fade it out with the chorus repeating?

Overall: A solid piece that's got some good potential. Keep it up!

-SuperDrummer146-

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