itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<R+> ESC]

Interesting...

You certainly took a turn in a different direction, that's for sure. The beginning is a little weird, but the end is definitely great, like the synths. I recognize that voice clip from FL : P

-Hey, maybe we could collab some time?

-ImperfectDisciple-

Rawrthaas responds:

Sent you a pm

[Boomer Kuwanger Stage]

Lacks your thought on the song...

You've got sound down obviously, the overall sound is quite nice! The thing you're missing is that a remix is YOUR own creation. Change it up! You want to create a composition you can truly call your own. It's like making your interpretation on something. You've obviously chose a nice song to do though, it's nifty. Keep working with your program to get as much out of it as you can, you've got the capabilities right in front of you!!!

-ImperfectDisciple-

DarkValentine responds:

thanks alot. i'm trying what i can do, to make it better obviously for me and such.

once i can get back into the groove of making my own tracks, like i did with "A Brave Warrior", then i'll be back in business. thanks once again for the advice

[Khuskan - Atomic]

YOU LITTLE BUGGER!!!

You used the "Duck and Cover" audio! I was saying to myself "I gotta try this in an industrial style!" but then, I thought I found what I wanted, and it has the same audio clips you used : - 0

P

Lolz, great audio! I've gotta try a piece like this!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check some of my ambient!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Khuskan responds:

Somebody got owned :-P

It's probably been sampled somewhere else as well, I wouldn't be suprised if theres 3 or 4 songs using samples from the same movie.

Then again, I take pride in using 'Duck and Cover' in my piece without a single recorded instance of the words 'duck' or 'cover' actually being heard.

Oh yeah, and this style is really, really damned fun. 7 hour turnaround from start of production to final mastering, it's the most rewarding track I've ever made.

[My First Punk Song (Demo)]

Pachabel's Canon Bass Line?

Sounds really great, just the fact you left the song pretty empty and all. Vocals would be nice? Maybe I'll try to record some, just silly ones if I actually do. Either that, or I'll at least write some : D

-I'll see what I can do, not promising anything : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Scribbler responds:

I actually am looking for a vocalist right now, PM if you are still interested.

[Mecha Assault]

CRAP MAN!

I like, wrote a whole review for this, and lost all the stuff ; (

Here's an overview though : D

-Nice drum samples
-Composition lacking
-Weird synths, but reflects the mood of the song.
-Song detached
-Beginning and end lack value

-Composition is your key downfall, so work on it! You've got the sounds. Produce the music, the feeling. This song has got little of anything without style and art in it. Keep learning to compose your thoughts and string 'em together : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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SakuraPanda responds:

Hmm I've alwaysed like your reviews thanks a lot man Myabye you can help me on that ^^;

[Saria's Song (Progressive)]

Interesting!

All these remixes you do of Mario songs are seriously just amazing, they've got your own touch to it in one way or another, whether it's genre, or a different composition. Just awesome, great job, love the organ : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Soundshifter responds:

thx a lot dude. ya i tend to put little twists, glad you liked

[Yogosun: Utopia]

Wow man : D

Didn't think I'd run into music this good for someone with only three track so far, but then again, expectations with newcomers is usually lower, you raised that standard : D

-Very nice melody, it's very suiting. Composition is great for the most part. The only thing is you use the same patterns over and over again. Add extra melodies, and riffs, maybe countermelodies. The layout of the song was nice, but predictable, keep the listen on their toes, but relaxed with the song for the most part. Create the tension, and then release it. This causes the audience to be attracted to what's going on, and what's going to happen, and the release makes the audience go "aah!"

-Good try mate, you're certainly getting there!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Jiao-Zhang responds:

And yes, there WAS a counter melody. It was that first synth that came in. I see what you mean by the tension, but I didn't really care that much about it becuase I just did this for fun! And no, I have been making music for a year now so dont except me to be a noob =p Thanks for the review man!

-Yogosun

[Air Stage]

Kinda poppy and fun!

Nice little VG feel as a blast from the past retro style, really tight stuff. Did you use MIDI charts? If so, maybe try your own version : D

-Tight!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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DarkValentine responds:

thanks ^_^. I like to keep some things retro, and close to the originals as possible. I'll definately give your page a look at.

i'm an old schooler, and trying to keep it live is what i do best ;)

[Mind Distortion]

YAY!!!

Great use of a hard kick drum, it's perfect for the mood of the song. Make a melody though, you've got that one riff, and that's it, expand the idea of what you've got so far. You've got some nice FX and stuff, just make a melody. Either that, or this. Do you have Fruity Loops? I use Fruity Loops, and I'm pretty good with melodies : D

-Either way, nice ; )

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Darkstalker-X responds:

Alrighty. thanks for the comment :D.

Yeah I use that software too, it's one of the few good music makers around :P.

[Amorosity]

Fairly tight!

I'm guessing you use Fruity Loops to make your music? Really cool man, good driving force of the song, I can really see you getting better at this as long as you try hard for it : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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chromic responds:

I like the way you make your music. thanks for the review, I'll be sure to look at more of your music soon. ^^