Yeah, you're back!
Yeah, another Rawrthaas track, just what was needed now : D
-This is a really nice, atmospheric loop, maybe more of a prodiminant melody, but it's still killer!
-Good job man!
ImperfectDisciple (formerly SuperDrummer146)
I've got a new song comin' tonight at 8pm Eastern Time, check it : D
Def checking it disciple..
This really wasn't intended to be a full track - coulda made it to be but was really just a "Hey, I'm back." thing.
Glad you liked
It's okay...
-Some of the patterns seems to be synced-up incorrectly, you might want to check that. Just that main part w/ the drum loop would be tight, all this stuff leading into the main part isn't necessary unless you're trying to make a full song out of this. Good try though, trying is better than never trying at all, with more attempts, you gain more knowledge : D
+ImperfectDisciple+
Yeah I know, I knew it would be poop but i WILL Make it into a good song and 'll spend more time on it. Just wanted to know what the people thought of the Layered VSTi's
Interesting : D
+Nice beginning, very futuristic.
-A melody needs to be present in order to create a seriously good song out of this, but I'm sure you're working on a melody
+Nice percussion : D
-A nice chord progression would be pleasing instead of the same thing the whole time.
+Nice use of...I'm not sure, the FX on instruments, some delay mixed with some flanger thing I'm guessing.
-JUST FINISH THIS FIRST! : D
-SuperDrummer146- (for now)
lol thanks. yea i am planing to keep working on it cuz it was a project that i thought the forums at the FL Studio Song Exchange could use. There's no Goa/Psychedelic at all!! how weird is that? hey btw, you got fl studio right? have you ever used the song exchange forums? If not, come by. here's the url :
http://forum.e-officedirect.com/forum.exe?forumname=flstudio_s.ex
hope to see you there maybe...
-Allen
Hey man!
Glad you're interested in making music something you love to do : D
-Here's some pointerz...
-You used a lot of presets, you'll want to avoid that, I'm not sure you really like those FL presets, they aren't the best thing to express the feeling you put into your music. I suggest getting a couple of plugins for FL. Where? You can get some good free ones at www.kvraudio.com
Otherwise, look on Google for "Cakewalk's Rapture", "Cakewalk" in general, "free plugins", "VST's". Plugins can help to enhance the quality of your music using soft synthesizers and many other plugin tools.
-Get some drum samples that sound good and stop using loops, make your own beats. Go to www.breakbeat-paradise.com/ to find some killer drum samples.
-Learn to automate. It's a daunting concept at first, but really helpful when you learn it. Look at the video tutorials that you can see when you register FL Studios. Or ask in the Audio Forum, PM a master with FL Studios, find a way to learn : D
+You've got a knack for composition, keep with it and drive hard : )
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my Dreamerz series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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Wow, this is a model example on how reviews should look.
\m/_OHMYFREAKINGOSH!_\m/
My turn to review you : D
-Certainly an awesome song, digging the dynamics, but like OCON said, maybe a really big boost at the end would really send this over the edge?
-Loving the main melody : D
-Overall, this song is seriously really cool!
-SuperDrummer146-
Thanks for the review dude. I might submit a longer version some day
\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/
Wow, you're getting much better, here's some more things to think about.
-Nice solo melody, truly impressive
-Make the piano feel more dance-like, with more than just whole notes, make it busier by hitting down the same chord more than once in the groove time it has. I really don't know how to explain it too well, make it groove better!
-Dude, you're improving at high rates of speed, only other thing that kinda irked me was that the solo instrument wasn't sustained enough, and it didn't say around long enough, as soon as you put that solo thing in, let it go through to the end of the song. Maybe at the point you ended the solo, make that synth take the place of the piano in chords, and let the piano rip it : D
-SuperDrummer146-
yea, i probably should have used that saw more. but then i think it would be too repeitive and none loop-like, i wanted that to the kinda apex to the loop.
HEYHEY!
Tight mix, I like the slicing you did! Do you have Fruity Loops 6? If so, could I collab more onto it? I've got a couple of ideas on the song that'll add to mixing up the dynamics with other Windows sounds.
-Either way, tight track : )
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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Yeh feel free to add more
\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/
Uh, wow, seriously, I don't see why you get more recognization around here. That's some tight talent you've got there! Killer song!
Maybe set this as a verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/chorus/end type thing? I see you eventually get to a break within the song, but maybe a verse type of thing to go in between choruses? You've got a TIGHT ending, that was great!
Otherwise, this is seriously one of the best pieces I've come across on Newgrounds : D
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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Thanks for the honest review!
Maybe i will build a bridge before the chorus! Good idea for that!
I am very proud of this song, because it is my first guitar recording. (as i said in my comment.)
Check out my other stuff here! I would recommend "Kim - 42 Deep Thoughts".
It didn't get so much feedback here on NG and i think it deserves a bit more!
I will check your stuff and review them.. but later!
So thanks!
Review more please! :D
\m/_Getting There!_\m/
+The melodies and the main synths make this quite the interesting little dreamy track
+Lots of psychedelic feeling, like...drugs? I dunno, never tryed drugs, that's the impression I get
+Vocals? Weird...
-Your bass drum just killed this song! It's so whimpy! For rave, I expected "BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM!" and at least a 4.5 earthquake to erupt within my room, but I heard this "boom boom, hehehehe, boom...erm...boom...is that good enough?"
...
NO IT ISN'T
-Alright, so maybe I when too far being stupid with that, but you get the idea. Kick up the bass drum : )
-Nice job, just work on that one aspect!
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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hey thanks man.
I tried to make the kick more "BOOM", except, sadly, it distorted the other synths etc. Thanks for review man!
nova
\m/_Tight!_\m/
+Dynamics are very nicely used throughout the song.
-I don't like how much of the song is strings, maybe add a fuller ensemble?
+Composed very nicely my friend : )
+The feeling is very well attained.
+ & - The tempo changes are slightly weird at first, but they kinda grew on me throughout the song, very nice.
+ & - Using the GPO recording, it seems as though some elements are lost in the mixing compared to your first recording.
Wow dude, very nice!
-SuperDrummer146-
-Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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I did work some with those dynamics. Took some time lol, thanks. This song is supposed to be just string orchestra with bells and solo flute. I found that brass, other winds, or even percussion ruined the feel I was going for. Yeah, I thought the tempo changes were slightly odd, but I just wanted certain parts faster and certain parts shorter lol. It turned out not too bad in that aspect. What type of elements seem to be lost in this recording? (Do you mean this is a bad thing?)
Thanks for the review man. I'll check out your audio sometime.
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