itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Believe This]

Sweet!

This isn't a bad submission at all! Nice job!

Bad things

-The clarity suffers just a little when the synths get slightly distorted after the calm part in the beginning.

-Slightly repetitive.

-You used some techniques I've heard in some other songs in the beginning.

Good Things

-After the distortion, it was very pleasant!

-Fun, catchy tune.

-You obviously took some time to make some of this.

-Nice samples!

Great job, you're on the right track!

-8/10, 5/5!

-SuperDrummer146

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AphelionX responds:

i was afraid some one would knotice that i have some repedtitve stuff in there...but im glad ya summed down the good AND the bad in there ^.^

[Lakeside District]

Whoa whoa whoa!

Slow down! You're not getting any better by putting random songs here that only take you an hour at most! Take it easy, and take your time with your songs, and learn to get better. You're only making yourself a worse name by putting stuff up that people wouldn't usually want to listen to.

-Don't use the FL samples, find some that you like, sounds that make the song the way you like

it. Get some plugins too, they help A LOT!

-Just make this your own, not Fruity Loops style. People get bored of that after a while.

-Just keep trying, you'll get there : )

-SuperDrummer146

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blue-eyez responds:

safe for the advice. having heard your music i see where you're coming from (you've got some complicated tracks man!)i'll try and take my time from now on. By the way "all is finished" and "recovery..." are some beautiful tracks man! I'll keep on trying and one day maybe i'll get up to your level...hopefully! :)

[The Mario and Zelda ragtime]

Sweet!

The ragtime adds a new feel to the song in general. It's more fulfilling in a sense. The Zelda ragtime was okay, but the Mario one seemed to do better, probably because of it's composition, it's easier to ragtime than the zelda melody. It's still pretty good though.

Bad Things

-Piano only mixes of video game music, especially zelda and mario, have been done many times.

-The chord progression at the beginning of the Zelda ragtime just didn't make a lot of sense. They seemed off. Either that, or the chord progression just doesn't work in ragtime.

Good Things

-Nice ending!

-A ragtime feel like this, I don't think I've heard. And it also took a lot to transfer this to ragtime.

-Clarity is awesome!

-Catchy the way you played it.

Overall, it's not bad. Keep working at it!

-SuperDrummer146

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shermannetti responds:

Wow!!! Thank you!!! If only all reviews were like this one... Id arranged it in only one day... :) I'll keep uploading my other video-game (non-original) :D mixes, which are much better. PD: Ur muzik is great!

[Plasmas bro]

Cool!

Kinda laid back. Makes today a little better, since I'm mad at just about everything : \

-Cool song, you're getting a lot better!

-SuperDrummer146

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Syntrus responds:

i'm glad it helped u with your stress

[Dreams (Final Cut)!]

Dagonit!

I really want to put my drums into you song! It would be awesome, but I dunno if I could. I just may have to see right now : )

-SuperDrummer146

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Naitzmic responds:

Go for it!
Just please credit me and Alex if you do.

[The Depression Independance]

It's so engaging!

I could easily see why you won $1000 for this song. It's got a lot of feeling, even with the okay recording. The playing is just masterful, I haven't heard anything so diverse in quite awhile (okay, a day or two, but still :P). This is seriously an awesome talent you've got here. I heart it!

-Awesome stuff, keep at it!

-SuperDrummer146

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Sevanimation responds:

Thanks for the compliments bud

[My Mario Land]

Pretty sweet.

I'll fiven just 'cause I do that kinda stuff.

-This tune, eh? It's always a nice one, and you made your own for the most part. The bass backround is hard of hearing, so turn that up, because the bass is usually a foundation for your song as well as the drums. The clarity on the crash hits cackled a little, along with the snare, the sample isn't that great. It's a nicer composition of it though. Don't overuse the snare buildup too much! It could distract after a while.

-Good try, hope to see yah get better!

-SuperDrummer146

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Uly responds:

Thanks so much for your review, I will take into consideration what you suggested before releasing my next one (Louder bass and better drum management).

So, I think I'll deem 5 dowloads and 3 votes for it a success, for now. ;)

[Crying Angels]

Sweet!

I'll go to my drumset and make a beat, and then send it to yah if you don't mind : )

-Check my stuff out if you haven't : )

-SuperDrummer146

kilder responds:

great! i'll check out your stuff

[Running Away]

Sweet!

The tune is great, just fix your clarity, it's kinda crackly at certain parts, watch out for that. Nice for an intro, I dunno about a menu, maybe if it's looped?

-Good musical piece there! Come check my stuff out!

-SuperDrummer146

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kilder responds:

i know the clarity sux...i'll work on a better version. thanks for the review!

[Highway To Bliss]

THIS SUCKS!!!

Just kidding, because I can : P

-Anyways, the beginning starts off nice and calm. Now I know why you needed a jazz lounge beat : )

-Vocals are nicely done, maybe vocode it towards the end of the vocal pattern to mix it up a bit. I like how you use electronica sounds and put jazz with it, nice touch!

-A little repetitive, but still very nicely produced!

Great job!

-SuperDrummer146

T7online responds:

Aye, this be a great review, thanks :D

I like the vocoding idea, could defanetly spice things up a bit!