Sweet!
This song is pretty catchy! It sticks really easily into your head. There isn't much to this, but it's a nice loop. Kinda puts the image of someone waking up into my mind. Simple, and yet extremely sweet job!
P.S. What happened with the clarity on that one song of mine that I just submitted? Not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to get feedback to do better : )
-SuperDrummer146
yo i think with the clarity thing u over did the synths. they synged my speakers a bit. its a turn it down review. don't worry about it i get pissed when somone hits me with a low effort mark so u know.
It's wierd...
...like, some of your other songs tend to go really off rhythm and tempo, but this one was insanely perfect, and better than all of your other stuff. This would work nicely for a carnival game, which really makes me wish that I had flash skillz, lol. This is your best piece so far, and you've really improved your songs. The rhythm is much improved, the groove keep to the same, and this is just SO catchy! It's great, and sounds very proffesional! Great job!!!
-SuperDrummer146
-Feel free to check some of my muzik!
Thank you! It's always nice to get a good review and not a review where someone just says "Cool" Thanks for letting me know I've improved, I'll definately check out you music to do a little downloading and reviewing when I have the time.
Kool!
It's always fun to hear a Zenon track. I would critique it 'till your brains fell out, but either way, it wouldn't matter, because this is still an insane track. And it's just cool. I dunno, I can't explain it, it's just that good!
-SuperDrummer146
I made this song using headphones, and I'm listening it on speakers... it sounds horrible :(
I really should have checked that out before I submitted... needs more trble in the leads and less in the bassline >:/
Oh well, I guess I'll fix it later. Thanks for the review.
Dude!
This was pretty sweet, but your potential is held back big time!!!
Some pointers...
-The same guitar riff gets REALLY repetitive after a while, there's nothing else going on really. I mean, it changes up once, then what happens then? Nothing else. Just one guitar solo. That kinda blows the song out of what it really could do. Nice riff, bad working of the song to make it diverse.
-I'm a drummer too. Now, I'm not trying to offend you in any sort of way, but seriously, start playing more, and more, and practice more, and more. You're using very generic fills, going from the snare to the low toms most of the time, and they're not going to help you. You've gotta break your boundaries and start developing your fills. Also, tranfering your beats, like from one beat to another, were not pleasant. They didn't groove nicely with the riff, either because it was the beat, or because you were shifting tempos way too much. You've got lots of potential, but you're not there at all. To groove, you're beats and fill MUST be smooth, you can't have choppyness like you had. Some of the beats were just like that, and they were fine. But other times, you had EXTREME gaps between your fills and beats and the sort. Keep playing with people!!! It's the only way to get better at being a band.
-What's with the child's voices in the backround? It's was wierd with that ambience in the backround. Make sure you don't have extra noice around you when recording.
-Overall, I'm not saying this is bad, but you've got a ways to go with developing a song. Keep goint at it!!! And check some of my stuff.
-SuperDrummer146
Okay, thanks
Sweet!!!
Insanely fun piece. This would be a good shooting game piece, like, for the intro movie of the game. Slightly too distorted to hear everything going on, but it's actually okay, because the distortion in itself is a backdrop, so that's pretty cool. Everything grooved very nice. I dunno if this is DnB, it felt Industrial, but whatever, that's for other people to decide. Nice job, and keep it up! Whatever you're doing is nice. Just keep building upon it, putting the icing on top of the cake.
-SuperDrummer146
Lovely big review. Lol you know i was actually gonna put it in industrial but im sick of all my songs ending up there so i stuck it in DnB. Think the fast tempo and the bass warrants it.
Wow!
You've got a really good ear. How long have you been playing guitar? That was also a very insane piece. Heck, all of your remixes are absolutely mind blowing and different. It's fun to listen to too!
-Check out my techno if you haven't, it's my best stuff. Rate it too! And thanks for the previous review!
-SuperDrummer146
hey thanks, I've been playing for two years, but it runs in the family so i learn fast, I'll be sure to check out your other stuff
Cool.
Hope to see the final production. I really can't make too many suggestions on this, but hopefully, that's like, and intro, and outro, or something, because a general rock loop like that just screams for some rocking action. I would say right now, this is more classic rock feeling, so if you wanna keep it in general rock, it would be kinda cool to hear some pumped up parts. And most importantely, have fun with it!
-SuperDrummer146
-P.S. Check my audio page, there's more on it than your last visit : )
Oh yeah. Heh, I completely forgot about the classic rock catagory... I'll upload the finished one in classic rock section for sure. It's too bad you can't change stuff once you upload it... Cuz this doesn't loop properly either... Haha.
I'll be sure to check out your stuff.
Thanks for review
Well...
Some of the mixing could be done better. The crash seemed really out of volume placement at times, and some of the instrument choices weren't very good. But it's catchy in a wierd way, I almost liked the bass part, it's tight. The drums could be improved. And by the by, there is NO FREAKIN WAY this is 270, your bass drum part determines that, you'd have to double 135, the tempo this is at now, to get to 270, the eight note tempo = 270, but the normal quarter note tempo = 135. You've got to think on that one before using it as an advertising ploy, lol.
-Good job, check my stuff and rate it.
-SuperDrummer146
*Cough* Umm, yeah.... :) Yeah, totally honest, It was 270, but I just spaced the kicks out every 8th step and the sythns around every 4th step. Lol...Thanks for the review, checkin your stuff out...
Hmm...
...I was looking at a review by g-rave (the awesome dude), and I was thinking, maybe you're so under-rated due to the fact that some people may think there isn't enough diversity, but I think not, this is insanely awesome. Maybe if you work at it, you'll get really good, and shove it out there as a shining thingy of glory, or something, I dunno...
-Anyways, go check and rate my techno if you haven't already!
You get perfect review score...
...cause this sounds spacey, and I need something spacey for my solar system project in Earth Science, lol.
-It's a nice track, but sometimes, it kinda seems that the crash cymbals are slightly out of place. Overall, this is a very enjoyble piece, and REALLY SPACEY!
-Come check out some of my techno, and rate/review it. Have an awesome day!
-SuperDrummer146
Thanks alot,
I dont know what spacey means though, lol.
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