itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[F1uk3 - Dedication]

Dude!!!

Nice, I've gone through this riff on the piano before, wow! To see it in a song is pretty awesome, and for a first song, it's not bad. Of course, it will need improvement.

-First of all, the song tend to be kinda empty, like, not enough there. A giant buildup would help you build more into the song though, the the way your song is set up. Some nice counter-melodies, and other bass backrounds/effect would help to liven up the song.

-Second, for the riff you chose, it really seems that this isn't intense enough, but the diversity of each instrument is okay. Just more is needed.

-Also, in the quiet parts, really take the time to really make it powerful, heart-renching, or something, 'cause that would so make that part more emotional for the song.

-The drums are slightly generic, work on that sound.

-Well, I added in what I could. Nice job for a first song! Check out some of my techno and rate if you need some ideas : )

-SuperDrummer146

-And welcome to the Audio Portal!

F1uk3 responds:

Thanks for the the compliments and input. I'll be sure to keep those things in mind when I rework the song.

[**Halo-Remix**]

Alright...

Okay mix, but it needs some actual drums. I would be willing to provide though services, though it might be 'till later, like, summertime, but besides that, if you could shoot me an e-mail (it's in my profile), you could e-mail a version without drums in it, and I could add real drumset. Heck, to tell the truth, I've actually worked on the drumbeat for this song before, so I pretty much know it.

Anyways, this is a nice mix, 7/10, 5/5! Check out some of my techno songs!

-SuperDrummer146

Dj-Rec0il responds:

yeh im acaully still working on it but i havnt had much time so i just uploaded what was finnished of but thx for the rev anyway good you liked it :)

[March of the Demons--_--]

Dammit!

I'm sorry that I accidentaly zeroed your song. Please forgive me, my mouse seriously messed up really badly. I didn't mean to do it, you have my word. This is a totally awesome song, I made a big mistake though.

-Sorry that I did that, I'll try to get someone to fiven it.

-SuperDrummer146

PERVOK responds:

Haha, your talking to a guy who doesn't give a shit about scores :)

Don't let it bother you.

[Leviathan's Redemption]

Well...

...both your first one and this one kinda sound the same, but the beginnings are slightly different, and this one has more character. The drums seem out of place without a little more going on with it. It does kinda remind you of a sacraficing though, which is pretty cool (Inca, Aztecs or one of those tribes?).

-The song is themed nicely. Good job! Check out some of my techno songs and rate them, you're bound to like them!

-SuperDrummer146

ShinDenjin responds:

sweetness dude, thanks. I'll be sure to check them out when I get the chance^_^

-SD-

[<R> Redwake]

Nice!!!

Pretty sweet. I like your instrument melodies and the such. The drum beats are awesome, but the choice of types of drums could be done better. Otherwise, this is just phenomenal. I enjoyed it!

-Check out some of my techno and fiven it, you're bound to like it!

-SuperDrummer146

Rawrthaas responds:

I fivened your stuff :D

[sinister ish dnb short loop]

Yeah, you're getting better.

You just have to keep working at it. Listen to any music you like, you'll pick up a thing or two there. If you have no idea of music theory/structure, it's kinda hard to make your own stuff. So yeah, keep working at it, and check out some of my techno mixes!

-SuperDrummer146

SpamWarrior responds:

Haha dude, i do listen to everything. being broad minded makes it a right bastard to write anything.

Maybe i just have add, cos i cant concentrate for shit. who knows. cheers for the review tho, sure i'll check you out.

[Land Mine--_--]

Industrial DnB!

That's what it made me think. You had some pretty interesting machinery-type sounds, like that hissing noise, for example. The drums could have slightly more variety, but it's nothing really tormenting to the overall sound. The main dark theme is awesome, kinda makes me think evil bad guy factory or something. Maybe an all out intense part that's totally full blown would be nice : )

-Well, you did this nicely, and it was quite enjoyable. Well, if any of my songs are "magically" going to get a review, it'll might be TRS-Marimba Mania! Keep in mind, if it's magical, there will be a raised review score and overall score, meaning above a 4. Lol, just kidding with you, do what you want.

-Great job!

-SuperDrummer146

PERVOK responds:

I think I will cast my magical reviewing powers now.

*POOF*

[Tetris Encore (Tetris Remake)]

Dude, this is my piano!

I recognized every synth and drum beat! And you probably don't remember me, but I reviewed one of your earlier works, and you even said it was a Yamaha piano of some sort. I know for sure! Great job doing so much with a piano!

-SuperDrummer146

P.S. Check out my techno songs and rate/review them!!!

MilkMan-Dan responds:

No way!... you have a Yamaha DGX-305???!!!

That's freakin fantastic!... I think it's the greatest thing that ever happened to me :P. Besides... u know... girls and stuff. Anywho... isn't it freakin amazing what that thing can do. Every song in my arsenal is made with that thing. I'll be glad to check out some of ur work in good time... never u worry :).

[You're Damned Pt.2]

Wow!

This is pretty cool. I'll be honest, I don't listen to hip-hop entirely too much, so I apologize if any of critiquing is kinda off. It happens, but yeah...

-Anyways, you've got yourself a quality piece here. It jumps out at you, especially the synths you've used, those were pretty awesome. Some of the voices you used seem to overlayer each other, creating a booming sound that was a little too aquward to my ears, but it could have easily have been my speakers. The only thing I suggest that you could add is a part without drums, and the main chorus you've got, and the drums can build back in towards the end of the chorus, or that section.

-Nice piece, come check out my techno songs, you're sure to get a kick out of them!

-SuperDrummer146

BeAtBrEaKeR187 responds:

yeah thanks, feed back from peeps who aint from teh hip hop section is always kool with me so thanks

~holla~
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[The adventures of M'bnoemnoem]

Dude, it's a WinTang production!!!

Yeah, you made another song! Sweetness!

-Anyways, this seemed something like you'd hear on a popular Game Boy game or something, but it's cheery and fun. Hmm, maybe you could switch things up by making the intro how you pulled the whole song out to, and it bursts into some DnB beats and the song, and just change around the rhythm of the melody and such to fit that, that would be tight!

-After that, I'm really unsure of ideas. If you need any ideas, go check out my techno songs that I've released and fiven them (optional, but recommended, lol).

-Good start, hopefully, you get some really good ideas!

-SuperDrummer146

WinTang responds:

Thanks for the review, but I don't really get what you mean... I'll contact you about it sometime soon, if that's okay with you.